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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 23, 2009 20:42:36 GMT 10
Milly heard yelling and it encouraged her that she was running the right way. She ran around a few bends, she could no longer hear any footsteps behind her.
Milly saw the entrance to Alcatraz and she ran out through it, she needed to find the rest of the group.
Suddenly something smashed into the back of Milly. She went sprwling on the ground.
She rolled over on her back and screamed; the loudest, shrillist scream she could manage.
((I edited it and made it the way that you wanted. is that okay?))
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Post by Farrelei on Feb 24, 2009 15:18:49 GMT 10
((Taago said he'll delete the lame post, so okay))
Jacob swung around quickly, admittedly frightened by the shrill scream. "Did you hear that?" he asked Maverick, "Let's go!" The turned and started running, but not many others noticed as he ran into the darkness...
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Post by Biomanic on Feb 24, 2009 15:22:30 GMT 10
((*Deletes previous post, due to it's extreme levels of lame...* Okay, We can now properly do this, due to the goodness of Crazies post. Lets try again))
Maverick spun around, "What the fuck was that?" He was a little nervous about running around the corner to see who it was, but his legs started moving out'f curiosity. "Come on!" Maverick yelled to the others.
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 24, 2009 18:19:43 GMT 10
((my post was quite good, thankyou. LOL.))
Milly screamed again, louder then before. But no one was behind her, it seems she was pushed by nothing. Man, this place is haunted, Big time. I really need to get out of here.
Milly scrambled up, to her feet.
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Post by Biomanic on Feb 24, 2009 20:45:19 GMT 10
Jacob, Maverick and an assortment of other people, ran around the corner to see who was screaming.
"Milly? What's going on? Why'd you scream?"
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 24, 2009 21:19:03 GMT 10
((YOU KNOW MY NAME ?)) Milly gasped for breath and spun around to see some people from the tour group. Maverick, was the only one she knew by name. 'I-I-' She stuttered. 'Saw something and... Then i guess I fell down.' Milly said lamely, feeling her heart beat slow to almost normal. Milly walked over to Maverick and got as close to him as possible, without it being weird and awkward. 'Where is everyone else?' She asked, inching a little closer. She needed the comfort of people. Alive people...
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Post by Biomanic on Feb 25, 2009 15:21:16 GMT 10
"Um, everyone else is back at the entrance, we're going home."
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 25, 2009 15:40:42 GMT 10
Milly covered her face with her hand, in embarrassment. 'Um okay, sure. Lets go down to the docks then.'
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Post by Biomanic on Feb 25, 2009 15:57:59 GMT 10
The group of six ( Maverick, Jacob, Milly, Shiro, Billy-James and Tasha) wandered cautiously back to the docks.
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Post by Smallfry on Feb 25, 2009 16:06:46 GMT 10
"Does anyone here have a clue to where we are?" Shiro said.
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 25, 2009 16:16:12 GMT 10
(( Okay, now im confused, really confused))
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Post by Biomanic on Feb 25, 2009 17:43:21 GMT 10
((Yeah I am too?))
Maverick made his way to the entrance of Alcatraz, with the others soon behind. As he got there, the rest of the group seemed to be missing. "Ahh, guys? Have you seen the others?" Maverick spun around as some of the group wandered up to him.
"Where is everyone?"
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 25, 2009 21:16:57 GMT 10
Milly looked around and then behind her, for the others. 'I cant see them!' Then Milly gazed out towards the sea around Alcatraz. She spotted a blinking light, on top of a boat. A boat? A boat. Milly pointed at the boat. 'Um, Guys, the boat left.' Milly said shrillly, beginning to quiver.
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Post by Farrelei on Feb 25, 2009 21:20:12 GMT 10
Jacob turned around, "...What? That's not the same boat. They wouldn't have left without us..." Suddenly, all the main lights that had been on for the tour went out, and everything was plunged in complete darkness. Jacob stared down at the dock, which was also now, pitch black. "...Is this part of the tour?"
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Post by hiccup68 on Feb 25, 2009 21:27:55 GMT 10
Milly screamed when the lights flicked off, un expectadly ((?)).
'Is this part of the tour?' She heard Jacob ask slowly.
'No, it cant be. This has to be... be... ILLEGAL! They cant leave us here.' Milly began to sob.
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