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Post by Farrelei on Mar 25, 2008 17:30:06 GMT 10
The night sky, the darkness The Moon shines out at me, letting me know I'm not the only one. The gentle water pushing ahead, desperatley trying to reach the land. I stare through the darkness, up into nowhere. The gentle breeze washes all my worries away. And all that is left is pure emotion But the truth remains hidden there, past the darkness. And I will always continue to search for it. I will stare up there, always, but I'll never make it through. And I will wonder... Will the water ever reach the land? Will the Moon ever be able to smile? Will I be able to touch the sky through the darkness of the abyss? I will never make it through... I am forever consumed in my limiting reality But I'll always live my life in an endless fantasy.
~Please rate out of 10.
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Post by Milk on Mar 25, 2008 19:44:08 GMT 10
im not going to read that much
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Post by Farrelei on Mar 26, 2008 15:42:51 GMT 10
Meh.
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Post by Jakeby on Mar 27, 2008 9:22:52 GMT 10
MEH!
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Post by Farrelei on Mar 30, 2008 13:50:45 GMT 10
Has anyone actually read my poem yet?
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Post by Frost on Mar 30, 2008 20:03:35 GMT 10
i did, im sure milk was crying inside.
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Post by Farrelei on Mar 31, 2008 16:19:18 GMT 10
Lol!
Wait-Really?
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Post by Jakeby on Apr 2, 2008 18:32:05 GMT 10
yes!
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 4, 2008 18:13:06 GMT 10
...Thanks :]
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Post by Milk on Apr 4, 2008 20:03:07 GMT 10
.......
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 4, 2008 20:09:58 GMT 10
Did you think that, Milk? :]
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Post by hex on Apr 13, 2008 20:32:18 GMT 10
i scrolled through it pretty quickly.
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 15, 2008 20:32:06 GMT 10
You're supposed to tell me if you enjoyed it or not, and help me with my writing.
How about this, guys, rate my poem out of 10 or 5 stars.
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Post by The Masked Menace on May 3, 2008 15:15:32 GMT 10
i can't be bothered to read it
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Post by Jakeby on May 3, 2008 15:33:50 GMT 10
wat...oh umm..5 stars
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