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Post by Farrelei on Jun 13, 2008 19:15:20 GMT 10
Suddenly, the bus lurched forward and Farrelei found his mouth over the metal bar that rose up from the chair in front of him, his teeth vibrating madly like gongs.
"LEARN TO DRIVE!" Farrelei yelled out, his teeth really did hurt, and he could hear other complaints from around him too. It was as if the bus had just slid down a sudden hill.
"Is this a shortcut?" Farrelei asked himself amongst all the yells and murmurs from around the bus, "'Cause I'm SURE that sign back there was where we were supposed to be heading..."
Farrelei thought he heard Macca cursing. He had hit his head against the window, suddenly, a figure rose above all others on the bus.
"YEAR 8! HOW MANY TIMES MUST I ASK YOU TO BE QUIET!? WE'LL BE TURNING THIS BUS AROUND IN A SECOND"
The bus suddenly lurched to it's side, followed by squeals from the girls.
Mrs Elkington (just thought she would die pretty awesomely) sat back down and shook her head, and Farrelei re-affirmed his fears about this camp and began humming the VEGETABLES song.
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Post by Frost on Jun 13, 2008 19:44:54 GMT 10
Claw rubbed his eyes and looked around, he couldn't hear a thing, he hit his right ear on the metal bar in front of him when the bus swerved, it ached like crazy, he turned to his side to see Smallfry next to him, quite unharmed by the looks of things, Smallfry looked over to Claw and his face suddenly was filled with horror, "What? What's wrong?" Claw asked.
Smallfry didn't say anything, after several seconds he pointed to Claw's Right ear, Claw put his hand up to it, and immediately he knew he must've been bleeding, he took his hand away and stared at it, there was blood all over his hand.
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 13, 2008 19:47:09 GMT 10
((The bus isn't crashed yet, just to let you know))
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Post by Frost on Jun 13, 2008 20:03:50 GMT 10
(( Yeah I knew that, I just was going to add that in there and when they DO crash it will get worse, and throughout the RP it will get even more worse and worse.))
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Post by Milk on Jun 13, 2008 20:17:01 GMT 10
Milk just sat there laughing at the reaction of his other classmates. Then he say Claw "WTF? How did that happern?" he asked. But then the bus skidded to the side and a whole lot of Girls screamed so he didnt get a answer. "What is with this driver? its like he's just letting the bus race down teh hill."
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 13, 2008 20:23:49 GMT 10
((Work on spelling lol))
Farrelei's ears perked up, "So now you're the one worrying, eh Milk!?" he screamed over the top of everyone else.
This time Mr. Wallace turned around, "Guys, please. I'm sure the road's just a bit slippery from the rain" he assured,
But Farrelei saw dissatisfaction in Milk's face. Milk seemed uncannily serious, maybe there really was something wrong...?
((Remember Milk it's you who stands up and moves over to the driver))
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Post by Milk on Jun 13, 2008 20:40:08 GMT 10
((yeah i know oh and btw *bursts out crying* ITS NOT MY FAULT THE TEACHERS COMPLEATLY IGNORED ME IN YEAR 1 AND K!!))
Suddeny there was a another swerve, but they where getting bigger every time. So Milk Stood up and said "Ok im going to see whats going on." So he walked up to the driver and said, "What the hell do you think your doing driving like thing?" but the driver didn't answer so Milk shook his shoulder and the drivers head slid back and milk saw blood on his head. "Oh my Go(sh)!" Milk shouted. and everyone looked at him strangely and Farrelei Said something about the 3rd Commandment. So Milk grabbed the wheel and tried to take control of the bus. When he did that everyone was so shocked and stood up shouting at him Mr. Wallace got up to try and stop him but at that moment the bus lost complete control and hit a large rock. Everyone felt a moment of fleeting death as the bus became airborne, sailing like a ship through water...
Until it turned sideways, tumbling down the hill like a rock itself and finally crashing on the ground. Not one person survived conscious. And if they did, they weren't conscience when they awoke...
((feel free to modify it if its not right))
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 13, 2008 20:54:51 GMT 10
((Modified slightly. We don't know who died... Yet))
Farrelei felt an eye open and felt immediate pain.
He couldn't remember where he was, nor whether he was still alive.
The ground was cold, and his head was wet and aching.
He managed to sit himself up, his neck sore and stiff. He opened his eyes wearily...
And wished he hadn't.
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Post by Milk on Jun 13, 2008 21:00:57 GMT 10
Milk was lying on the dirt but he didnt know why just a minute ago he was in the bus. Why was he out here? He tryed to sit up but he couldn't move his back. He looked down at himself and saw glass and blood all over him, then he saw the smashed bus window. He tryed to call out for help but he couldn't speak, he past out.
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Post by Macca on Jun 13, 2008 22:21:30 GMT 10
It was horrible. If everyone had been screaming about blood and the crash, that would have been bad. This was horibble. It was horrible because nobody screamed. Nobody moved. Nobody spoke. I had felt pain before. The worst pain I ha ever been in was when I staked my bike comming down a massive hill. I had cuts and bruises everywhere. But that was not pain. This was pain, although I haddn't gotten off as bad as some other people. When the bus violently lurched forward then backward I fell on the floor so when it rolled I didn't get bashed up against the sides... Much. I was the first up. There was too many people I needed to help, my head was spinning, most looked like they were either dead or unconscience. I tried to focus. HELP PEOPLE. The two words cleared up my head I sat up Farrelei, his eyes were open, just. I checked that he still had a pulse because his eyes, although open, were not moving. He had a pulse. I looked for a window to kick open. And thats when I realised. There was no windows, except for above and below me, the bus had rolled on its side. I pulled Farrelei to the back of the bus and with whatever strength I had left I kicked the back window. Nothing happened. I tasted blood, it was running down my face. I kicked again. Nothing. Again. Again. Again. With my last ounce of strength I kicked the back window and it finaly broke free. I pulled Farrelei out onto the forest floor and went back for someone else. First Claw. Smallfry. Tox. Peanut. Milk? Where was Milk? I looked around. My eyes were blurry from blood loss. I shook my head a kept going. Checking the people with pulses, pulling them out. Leaving the people without where they were. Soon I couldn't go on. My thirst raged because of blood-loss. My head was spinning. I steped out of the bus and collapsed on the forest floor and passed out.
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 14, 2008 7:42:11 GMT 10
People all around the forest floor were lying down. There was hardly any of them compared to the number there was in the bus before. He touched his hair slightly. Blood.
Apart from that and a critically large slice on his arm, he had no other wounds except perhaps a twisted ankle. But the pain still hurt so much that he couldn't really tell where it was coming from.
People are propped up in places, thought Farrelei, that means someone else is awake.
He stood, pain immediately affected his head and his left foot.
He limped over to some of his good friends, checking their pulses. He would've hecked the others, but the pain was too immense for him to do so.
Everyone's pulses were beating except Brayden's, whose body was sprawled out in a ball, unlike the others who had obviously been placed there by someone.
He must have smashed out the window...
Suddenly, something sparked in his mind. Actually, lots of things did. So much that he began to feel slightly dizzy.
He prayed. Long and hard. He prayed.
And he turned to the bus, hoping there would still be survivors inside.
He prayed for them all.
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Post by Frost on Jun 14, 2008 15:47:31 GMT 10
Claw's eyes shot open and immediately he coughed out blood, he looked around to see himself lying on the forest floor, he couldn't hear a thing, except a high pitched screech you get sometimes, Smallfry was down beside him, Claw didn't bother to check his pulse, because his chest wasn't moving the way it normally does when your lungs take in air, "(ANYONE! HE'S NOT BREATHING! HE'S NOT BREATHING!)" Claw yelled, but because he couldn't hear himself he didn't know if he was making any sense, and besides, hardly anyone was up walking around, Claw turned around to see the bus, by the looks of things it had slowly rolled down the hill even more because of the rain, and the hill looked like it was getting steeped from here.
Claw desperately tried to get up, and when he did so he felt immense pain, but he carried on, he had to find some people who were up to get the others form the bus...
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 14, 2008 19:03:03 GMT 10
Farrelei need only take one step towards the bus before he found Macca lying collapsed on the ground with Tristan lying unconscious on his back.
Poor Macca... thought Farrelei to himself, as it was obvious it was he who had been helping all those people out of the bus.
He dragged Tristan off to one side, whose pulse was weak but still faintly there before returning for Macca, who whose pulse was healthy.
He turned back to the bus when he saw another person standing near it.
"Claw!" he yelled, then realising that his throat hurt when he talked.
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Post by Milk on Jun 15, 2008 10:31:30 GMT 10
(by the way im using Alex because Milk's been nocked out for a while) Alex stood up he was in the backseat and had just rebounded againsed Joel M and Matt C
(Who where both dead but he didn't realise this) he looked around and saw what had happerned. Then he heard Farrelei call out to Claw, so he went over to Farrelei and said "Whats going on? and why did Milk crash the bus?"
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Post by Farrelei on Jun 15, 2008 13:19:37 GMT 10
Farrelei turned to Alex, who was surprisingly unharmed and calm.
"DOn't be an idiot, just drag these guys outta the bus, I have NO idea what's going on" he yelled, his throat pounding as he did.
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