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Post by Macca on Oct 3, 2008 13:18:29 GMT 10
MACCA WRITES TEH STORY 'BOUT TREES!!!!
Another Passer By By Macca
There went another. I thought to myself, as I stood there, like aslways, slowly dancing to the gusts of the wind. There went another. One fo the small moving trees, that danced out of tune to the gusts of wind, the silly small movers, they could not dance at all. All their bark was different to mine, and different to by brother's and sister's too. Their bark was not brown, but orange. They had no leaves and had only 4 branches. But this time one came by, and he only had 3, two on the bottom and one in the middle. This Small Mover had something hard on its top, and the middle branch suddenly started roaring, like a wild beast it roared. Also like a wild beast it had teeth, sharp teeth that moved round and round. The Small Mover held the wild beast as it cut into me. Going deeper, deeper, deeper. And suddenly, I started to fall, I fell right next to my sister. That day the wild beast, held by the Small Mover, killed me. I was taken away, chopped up and scattered. Never to dance to the gust of the winds again.
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Post by .c.o.o.k.i.e. on Oct 3, 2008 13:21:40 GMT 10
Lol, what a nice, calming story.
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Post by .c.o.o.k.i.e. on Oct 3, 2008 13:47:06 GMT 10
What about the tree part of it???
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Post by light on Oct 3, 2008 13:55:42 GMT 10
Omg,I forgot it was about Tree's. *Dies*
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Post by .c.o.o.k.i.e. on Oct 3, 2008 13:56:35 GMT 10
Lol, ha ha!
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Post by light on Oct 3, 2008 14:03:24 GMT 10
Lol,Ok Farrelei,I'll delete my post.
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Post by Smallfry on Oct 3, 2008 14:30:33 GMT 10
well...
naa jk
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Post by Farrelei on Oct 7, 2008 12:19:17 GMT 10
The competition will be judged on the 12th. I've seen some good poems and stories here!!!
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Post by .c.o.o.k.i.e. on Oct 7, 2008 18:48:59 GMT 10
ok, this is going to be really weird.
The tree is a important part of our society, It helps us build strong relationships in our community. It reminds us of places we've never been, It gives us the feel of hope and security. A tree can be a reminder of past times, Or it can be made into memories for our descendants. All in all, a tree is.... Love.
It's kinda cheesy and it doesn't rhyme or make any sense but its about trees.
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Post by Smallfry on Oct 7, 2008 19:50:50 GMT 10
Towering over every one Reach out over the world Entrance to a world of bugs Everywere Shelter
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Post by Farrelei on Oct 11, 2008 9:52:09 GMT 10
Okay, there was seriously a lot of good entries here, however...
Macca's story drew me in, even though it was tiny and ended quite crappily. I'm going to give Macca the 10 karma for this month's writing comp! Congratulations, Macca! ^^
*Locks*
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Post by Macca on Oct 12, 2008 14:39:27 GMT 10
You mean 5 karma, you only game me 5 karma. You gave me 10 because I got Octobers Official Poll question best answer. Does that mean I get 5 extra karma? It should. I'll PM you about it.
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