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Post by shadow on Apr 1, 2009 18:24:14 GMT 10
Well, i am new, so hello all!!!!
and i am a poet as well, so here goes!
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Post by shadow on Apr 1, 2009 18:24:33 GMT 10
Screaming Shout
What the heck
What happens next?
Nothing I bet
Life Line
In Lime Light
Loving Life
Lowering Lies
Flowering Out
Frost creeps in
Flowing Downstream
Flying Skyward
Truthfully speaks
Lying eyes down
Casting all care
Killing all fair
Laying down
What the hey
Let me stay
Dont turn me away....
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Post by Jakeby on Apr 1, 2009 18:25:24 GMT 10
Nice... May I ask, who are you? Maybe you should tell us a little bit about yourself  |
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 1, 2009 18:30:43 GMT 10
May I just ask if there was actually a story to that or was it just a fun word poem?
I love those. I often put really obscure and abstract storylines to it that only I understand, which is why I am asking =P
It's nice ^-^
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Post by shadow on Apr 1, 2009 18:34:04 GMT 10
im from wycliffe, and in yr 9, freinds with farrelei and other people..... yeah......
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Post by shadow on Apr 1, 2009 18:35:19 GMT 10
i dont think it has any reasoning behind it.... sometimes i suddenly realise what i was trying to get across, like ages after i wrote it so who knows.....
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 1, 2009 18:36:22 GMT 10
That happens to me sometimes as well, but usually I try and think of a meaning immeditaley after writing it, which often changes the poem altogether.
I dunno. We all have different methods.
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Post by Jakeby on Apr 1, 2009 18:37:03 GMT 10
Oh, hmmm.....I think I know who you are..
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Post by Milk on Apr 1, 2009 18:39:55 GMT 10
So do I..... Anyway that poem was weird. In a good way.
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Post by shadow on Apr 1, 2009 18:44:45 GMT 10
well wierd is good so thats good.
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