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Post by Farrelei on Apr 4, 2008 18:23:42 GMT 10
Once again, I'm lost In my head I wonder if it is me or you Maybe it's because all I do is follow. We all lose things sometimes But losing you would give me no more meaning. You've lost your love Yet stolen my heart And all I can do Is run after you. Every step takes forever With every pace comes a pain But I will always look For your lost love Because without it, all my searching will be in vain. And all I'll be doing Is running aimlessly Following your shadow, lost in the night. And until that day When you get back your love I'll be running after you No matter how hard.
~Please rate out of 10
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Post by Milk on Apr 4, 2008 20:00:49 GMT 10
you do that
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 4, 2008 20:10:25 GMT 10
-.-
You must learn to enjoy poetry.
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hex
Polysexual Unicorn Rapist.
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Post by hex on Apr 13, 2008 20:31:11 GMT 10
There is a song called lost and running by Powderfinger and it is okay.
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Post by Farrelei on Apr 15, 2008 20:33:07 GMT 10
What? there's a song called Lost and Running?
*Renames poem*
*Bows to hex* Thank you for pointing that out *exalts*
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Post by }]EtHAn[{ on Jan 25, 2009 7:58:19 GMT 10
9/10 the rithem is lost in a few places but the consept is grate *claps*
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Post by Farrelei on Jan 25, 2009 23:41:32 GMT 10
Thanks. This is one of my worst ones, in my opinion =/ I should post all my poetry here, and also on EmilieHawk. I only post it on Gaia and then nobody reads it xD; Oh well.
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